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New Book Sneak Preview

Here is an excerpt from my upcoming book (title TBD):

The Crumble

The world didn’t end all at once.

It ended in soft, sneaky ways. Like forgetting what joy felt like, or realizing the sound of notifications makes your chest hurt. It ended in late-night doomscrolls, in “I’m fine” texts sent with shaking thumbs, in the hollow calm of people pretending they’re not falling apart.

The apocalypse wasn’t fire and brimstone. It was burnout, wearing leggings and holding a coffee it didn’t even want anymore.

Somewhere between climate anxiety, capitalism, and “you just need to manifest harder,” we collectively short-circuited. And then we smiled for selfies. Because that’s what you do when the world feels like it’s collapsing … you pick a filter and pretend the lighting is just bad.

But under all the noise, something started to crack.

Not in a tragic way, more like an overdue shedding. Like a snake realizing its skin is too small, or a soul realizing it has outgrown its own performance.

The crumble isn’t destruction.

It’s awareness.

It’s the sacred, messy middle ground where everything fake stops fitting. Where you wake up one day and realize you can’t keep performing “fine” when you’re chronically exhausted from pretending you’re okay.

I used to think healing would look like glowing skin, tidy to-do lists, and morning meditations with lemon water. Turns out, it looks more like ugly crying in your car, canceling plans, deleting three-day-old texts you never sent, and relearning how to breathe without guilt.

The truth is, we were never built to live in permanent survival mode.

We were built to connect. To feel. To create beauty even when everything’s broken. So, when it all starts to crumble, let it.

Maybe that’s not the ending you feared. Perhaps it’s the beginning you needed.

You’re not falling apart. You’re composting.

And from that softness … new worlds grow.

Each short section with have workbook style questions with related quotes. Below is a sample:

The “Fine” Translator

Finish these like you’re texting your best friend:

When I say “I’m fine,” I usually mean: __________________________

The thing I’m pretending doesn’t bother me is: ______________________

If my body could text for me right now, it would say: _______________

Tiny rebellion (pick ONE)

Today I rebel by:

☐ turning off one notification

☐ drinking water like it’s a personality trait

☐ saying “no” without writing a novel as explanation

☐ doing the bare minimum… on purpose

☐ unfollowing one account that makes my brain feel like a broken dryer

☐ going outside for 3 minutes like a confused house cat

One sentence truth

The honest version of today is: ______________________________________

If this sounds interesting to you, follow along for more updates. And pick up You Were Never Broken today!

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The Best Books on Writing According to Random House

Writing is, as a general rule, hard. Defining yourself as a writer can be even harder. Sure, there are other difficult practices like law and medicine out there, but a person becomes a lawyer or a doctor when he or she passes a series of exams and graduates from a certain school. Writing doesn’t always work that way. There aren’t tests to study for and facts to memorize. Where are we supposed to learn how to write? From grammar rules to publishing advice to personal narratives, these books on writing reveal in intimate detail the ins and outs of what it means to call yourself a writer. Sometimes harsh, sometimes funny, but always honest, they can be thought of as a kind of syllabus for writing. Whether you’re an aspiring artist working on your first drafts or a seasoned veteran in the publishing world, these are some of the best books on writing with insight and wisdom that can support you at all stages of your writing process.

Dreyer’s English by Benjamin Dreyer

As Random House’s copy chief, Dreyer has upheld the standards of the legendary publisher for more than two decades. He is beloved by authors and editors alike—not to mention his followers on social media—for deconstructing the English language with playful erudition. Now he distills everything he has learned from the myriad books he has copyedited and overseen into a useful guide not just for writers but for everyone who wants to put their best prose foot forward.

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The Forest for the Trees (Revised and Updated) by Betsy Lerner

For both established and prospective authors alike, the publishing house can seem like a jungle. Luckily, Betsy Lerner is here to lead a safari, citing her vast collection of experiences as an editor as her field guide. The Forest for the Trees motivates writers by helping them get over their fear of the unknown. It’s less about taming the wilderness and more about facing the demons of self-doubt and sloth that live in every person’s own mind.

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The Elements of Style Illustrated by William Strunk, Jr. and E. B. White

William Strunk and E.B. White’s The Elements of Style is so widely known that we’re sure you already have a copy, but of course we had to mention it. The only style guide to ever appear on a bestseller list, this book should be your go-to if your writing is in need of an infusion of clarity. Plus, this particular edition is illustrated by Maira Kalman, adding a visual element of style to the classic.

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Naked, Drunk, and Writing by Adair Lara

Adair Lara’s Naked, Drunk, and Writing is a must-read for any memoirist or personal essayist. With experience as a teacher, editor, and, of course, writer, Lara’s know-how will help readers through problems like how to face your family after they’ve read your work and how to find an agent who will fight for you. The perfect mix of tough love, comic relief, and passion, Lara’s book is invaluable for anyone who needs a little help telling their story.

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Bird by Bird by Anne Lamott

Anne Lamott knows from writing. She’s the author of seven novels (with one on the way) and nine works of nonfiction — many of them bestsellers. In Bird by Bird, her 1994-published book on the craft of writing, Lamott addresses how to get started, accepting the shittiness of a first draft, writing groups, writer’s block, how to know when you’re done and more. Her words, advice, insight are priceless.

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Poemcrazy by Susan G. Wooldridge

Though some may be able to simply sit back and pull a poem from thin air, that’s not the case for most. Writing workshop leader Susan G. Wooldridge taps into her own experience writing and helping others write to share this compilation of prompts, ideas, and more. Poemcrazy is a guide that any budding poet will find valuable.

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Walking on Water by Madeleine L’Engle

Madeleine L’Engle has mastered the art of weaving faith into fiction. In Walking on Water, the late author explores what it means to be a Christian artist, and touches on the influence of science on her writerly life. This is, truly, a book that will hold appeal for writers and readers alike, as it sheds light upon the mind of one of this last century’s most talented writers.

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Story Genius by Lisa Cron

So much of writing is creativity. But let’s not forget about the scientific piece of the puzzle. In her new book, Story Genius, story coach Lisa Cron addresses just that, examining the role that cognitive storytelling strategies can play in writing — and how you can put them to work for yourself.

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Questions to Ask While Editing Your Manuscript

Questions to Ask While Editing Your Manuscript

Questions to Ask About Character Development

● Does every character have a strength?

● Does every character have a weakness?

● Have you properly arched all characters?

● Does the antagonist have motivation?

● Does the protagonist have motivation?

● Are there any unnecessary characters?

● Can you combine any two characters into one?

Questions to Ask About Scenes

● Does every scene move the story forward?

● How do the characters interact with the scene?

● Does the scene fit the genre?

● Does the scene fit the time period?

● Have you added too many details and weighed down the story?

Questions to Ask About Word Choices and Phrasing

● Have you chosen the right words to describe each scene?

● Have you eliminated weak words and phrasing?

● Have you cut out adverbs?

● Have you embraced active voice?

Questions to Ask About Plot, Pacing and Tension

● Is the plot engaging?

● Is the plot logical?

● Are all issues resolved?

● Does the plot make sense?

● Is there a hook?

● Is the plot focused?

● Are there surprises in the plot?

● Is the ending inevitable or in some way boring?

● Is there a climax?

● Is there a struggle? Is there tension?

● Have you addressed the conflict within each character?

● Have you identified how the characters struggle with each other?

Questions to Ask About Point of View

● Is the point of view clear throughout the story?

● Does the point of view shift around within a scene? A chapter?

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